Poetry Recital

This Term we had to choose a poem or a song and learn it off by heart. Then we had to read it to the class and be judged by it.  This is the poem that I chose.

 My HOLIDAY

Cold summer ice cream getting swirled into the cone 

I thought It was for me but it's my brother’s. I start to groan. 

We all head to the park, But when we get there dogs start to bark.

My brother and Dad play some football but then my brother trips and my ice cream starts to fall.

We all head home it's been a long day my Mum and Dad say it's bedtime And all I say is " OK

have a good night and sleep tight.

What did you like about it ?  Do you think I will remember my poem ?